Editorial Notes
Changes applied to the display/corrected text files, plus unresolved items left untouched until you decide.
Clear typos were corrected. Ambiguous canon/wording changes were not silently rewritten.
| File | From | To | Count | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Book 1 - The Dralathi War.txt | my self | myself | 1 | |
| Book 1 - The Dralathi War.txt | Earl Gray | Earl Grey | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | refiting | refitting | 1 | Confirmed by Marko. |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | being to slow | being too slow | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | no better opinion than to be on our side | no better option than to be on our side | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | that's why I'm talking you, Ila and Whistler with me | that's why I'm taking you, Ila and Whistler with me | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | sight seeing | sightseeing | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | sight-seeing | sightseeing | 3 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | Spotty turned to to Elizabeth | Spotty turned to Elizabeth | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | any injuries would help fully and quickly | any injuries would heal fully and quickly | 1 | |
| Book 2 - The Interlude.txt | Earl Gray | Earl Grey | 1 | |
| Book 3 - The Liberation of Hell.txt | The Beachead | The Beachhead | 1 | |
| Book 3 - The Liberation of Hell.txt | beseide Spotty | beside Spotty | 1 | |
| Book 3 - The Liberation of Hell.txt | it is not not funny | it is not funny | 1 | |
| Book 5 - Survivors.txt | jumped on to the desk | jumped onto the desk | 1 | |
| Book 5 - Survivors.txt | The sleek crafts descended | The sleek craft descended | 1 | |
| Spotty Angel.txt | their ordinance raining down | their ordnance raining down | 1 | |
| Spotty Angel.txt | Willow took a deep breath and nodded. **"I | Willow took a deep breath and nodded. | 1 | |
| Spotty WEF.txt | Zmajcica-G | Zmajcica-g | 2 |
| File | Issue | Text | Suggestion |
|---|---|---|---|
| Book 1 - The Dralathi War.txt | Possible speaker/address ambiguity | "It will not be I, Rokmar, who will conquer the stars," he said | Possibly “It will not be I, Ila...” or a rephrased Rokmar line. Left unchanged until Marko decides. |
| Spotty WEF.txt | Repeated POV escalation passages | Several guard / fighter pilot / airbase POV escalation beats repeat intentionally. | Kept intact. Optional future polish: keep all POVs but group them into collapsible “air battle escalation” sections or merge near-duplicate fighter POVs into one montage. |